the mage class
Opening Chapter Evaluation and Critique for Fantasy Fiction Stories
You can feel the story in your head. You know the voices of your characters, the scope of your world, and the grit of your technology, but you can't seem to fit it onto the page. When you're too close to the world, often it's difficult to see where the problem is, or the steps needed to bring your story together.
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Cast a revival spell on a stalled story with a mini developmental edit. Perhaps you don't have a finished manuscript, but you find yourself in need of some help to reach the final chapter. If you're not sure what's wrong and want a second pair of eyes to give you expert analysis and a little direction, this form of editing is for you. I will read the first 10% of your story, and give you feedback on what you are doing well, what needs work, and steps you can take to get yourself past your hurdles.